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COMMENTARY: "Order" from the Disclosureverse

Hello, and welcome to another stunning fic commentary!

Title: Order
The working title was Trial, but seriously, could it be more obvious?
Series: Disclosureverse
Summary: Phoenix stands trial.
I hate summaries. Does anyone actually like them?
Fandom: Gyakuten Saiban
Word Count: 2181 3619 with commentary and markup
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, AU, institutional D/s

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Fic commentary: The Story of Chris chapter 2

Fic commentary: The Story of Chris chapter 2

This commentary is for bironic, deelaundry and alemyrddin who voted for it on ficcommentary. Also for daisylily, jdr1184, hibernia1 and annalully who asked for commentaries of all three fics which were up for the vote, and now have them!
Warning: this commentary is very self-indulgent and occasionally spills into essay. I flag up when it threatens to become tl:dr.

Original headers and link to original:

TITLE: The Story of Chris (chapters 1-3 of 12)
AUTHOR: hwshipper
PAIRINGS: House/Wilson established relationship, Wilson/OMCs
RATING: NC-17
WORDS: these chapters 5500
DISCLAIMER: All characters belong to Heel and Toe Films, Shore Z Productions and Bad Hat Harry Productions in association with Universal Media Studios.
WARNINGS: There is a high quotient of slut!Wilson in this fic. Includes much non-monogamous sexual activity across the chapters, including exhibitionism, voyeurism, and group sex with strangers.
BETA: Enormous gratitude to starlingthefool
SUMMARY: The story of Wilson's relationship with Chris, an OMC. Told from Chris's POV.
A/N: Chris was the stranger who starred in Let Me Take You To A... and its follow-up Gay Bar Two, he just didn't have a name then.
Chris's relationship with Wilson here was also referred to in Memoirs of an Oncology Secretary chapter 3. However if you're coming to this from Memoirs rather than Gay Bar, please refer to the warnings above.
A/N 2: The chapter titles are all houseonmywilson Joy of Gay Sex prompts But not always used in the way you might expect.

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Penguin TARDIS

Fic Commentary: A Letter Home

Title: A Letter Home, Fic Commentary.
Original fic is here: A Letter Home
Author: Nemesis (Nems)
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: R
Warnings: None, really.
Summary: Written for the get_house_laid prompt 042. House/Wilson -- Wilson's parents find out, not in the way Wilson would have liked to tell them.
Disclaimer: Oh, come on. Does anyone actually bother reading this? Hoping for some amusement, perhaps? The real amusement is beyond the lj-cut. I thought up lovely stuff for you to read beyond there, and you're reading this drivel instead.
A/N: The fic was beta-ed by my wonderfully patient and *helpful* wives, Brit and Cris. Fic was written for Cris, who read about three different stories for this prompt before I settled on this one.
The commentary was beta-ed by no one :(

Dr. House would like to take this time and space to remind you that "puppies shouldn't be kicked, Chase is a whore, and reviews are love." Dr. Wilson would like to add, "Favorite lines are much appreciated, I'm told."

Follow the yellow brick road! Or the link. Whichever, really.
401 kitchen

Fic Commentary: Memoirs of an Oncology Department Secretary (1/4)

Fic Commentary: Memoirs of an Oncology Department Secretary (1/4)

Original Headers and link to original fic

TITLE: Memoirs of an Oncology Department Secretary (1/4)
AUTHOR: hwshipper
PAIRINGS: House/Wilson established relationship. Other significant others (Stacy, Julie etc) in passing.
RATING: PG-13
WORDS: This part 4800
DISCLAIMER: All characters belong to Heel and Toe Films, Shore Z Productions and Bad Hat Harry Productions in association with Universal Media Studios.
SUMMARY: Overall: The POV of Nora, Wilson 's assistant, an OFC, on the House/Wilson relationship. Spanning from Wilson's arrival at PPTH to early season 4, twelve years later. This chapter: Nora watches first Wilson and then House come to work at PPTH.
A/N: Timeline is my own. The character of Nora owes something to Mrs. Feldman in sydedalus's The Perils of Coming Home Early.
BETA: the sterling triedunture via the wonders of Google Docs.

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cafeteria

Fic commentary: Twenty Years of Stealing My Food: Part 1

Fic commentary: Twenty Years of Stealing My Food: Part 1

Original headers and link to original:

Title: Twenty Years of Stealing My Food: Part 1
Author: hwshipper
Pairing/Warning: House/Wilson pre-slash (later parts will be NC-17).
Spoilers: None in the sense it’s a backstory, though the timeline it is based on takes into account canon up to end of season 3.
Word Count: 3,000.
Disclaimer: All characters belong to Heel and Toe Films, Shore Z Productions and Bad Hat Harry Productions in association with Universal Media Studios.
Summary: House knocks Wilson down with his motorcycle. H&W meet-for-first-time, flirt over food, and start to invade each other's personal space.
Excerpt: As House was dressing Wilson's arm, Wilson looked at the box of Cheerios on the counter, and realized it was his box of Cheerios that House appeared to be eating his way through. In fact, he'd thought all week that the level in the box was going down rather fast. And although he couldn't be entirely sure, he thought that the half empty gallon of milk sitting on the table was also his.
Beta: enormous thanks to bornbeautiful
Author’s note: Part 1 of a backstory to take place over twenty years, taking us all the way to canon. Future parts written but need beta-ing (volunteers welcome).

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